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** From the Writing Workshops: Commas III
We’re still discussing commas.
Principle Three: Use a comma to separate an introductory passage from the main part of the sentence:
Three days after we completed the project, a storm wiped out the access road.
The introductory passage: “Three days after we completed the project.”
The main part of the sentence: “A storm wiped out the access road.”
Setting off introductory words, phrases, or clauses with a comma lets the reader know that the main subject and main verb of the sentence come later.
There are three kinds of introductory passages: small, medium, and large. No matter what size they are, an introductory passage cannot stand alone as a complete thought. It simply introduces the main subject and verb.
Introductory passsages can be short (one word):
First, we did a weather study.
Medium (two, three, or four words):
In that study, we learned the area hadn’t had a major storm in five years.
Or long (more than four words):
Despite what we had learned in the study, the storm still came.
Some references suggest dropping the comma with short introductory passages. We say balogna. Baloney.
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