JS Tip 175: From the Writing Workshops: Conveying Meaning
Last week, we asked you if these sentences meant the same:
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You gave us a tremendous response. Probably greater than any other Tips question. Thank you.
A majority of you felt the sentences meant the same, but the second was easier to read. (Mainly because “not” and “all” were co-located. Together. Separating them kept the brain in doubt.)
A sizeable minority said they don’t mean the same. Many felt that “not all” meant a portion, while “all . . . are not” meant none. Zippo. Nada. Rien. A subtle difference, but, nevertheless, a difference.
The Lesson Learned
Hey. Communication is tough. What we intend may not be what our audience understands.
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